Monday, September 22, 2008

**tomorrow........Won'T Come Comments

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Todays da day i end my birth
nw i choose heaven over earth
lyf never really seemed worthwhile
in dis crazy maze of darkness i was hunting for a smile
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 25 October 2008

The last line is haunting. Please yaar spare some intensity.Write ur poems on a paper and see if it burns or not. But anyway, loved ur poem. Thanks...

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