Thursday, December 3, 2009

Tomorrow Will Hatch Comments

Rating: 4.9

When tomorrow hatch
The future is born

Tomorrow is rind in the shell of uncertainty
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Abdullah Musa
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Doha Ewiess 07 February 2010

i liked the rhyming of some lines...nice choice of expressions, and as usual nice meaning :) keep it up :)

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Anna mimi 28 December 2009

Tomorrow is but hope. Very true. Nice poem. Well written 10+

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 December 2009

You are right, Abdullah, tomorrow is but hopes. You have described very optimistic viewpoint in a simple and beautiful manner in this poem. The title of the poem is very catchy...10/10. Regards Naseer

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