Friday, July 24, 2009

Tomorrow Will Come, Yet There Is No Future Comments

Rating: 4.6

Different seasons will come and go, come and go
The bee humming birds fly away and don’t always return
The perennial plants hibernate and grow
Bigger branches and buds that make men yearn.
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Joen Deviev 28 September 2009

when i read this... i realize something in my life... huh! what a great poem hebert... keep writing... ;)

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Ritty Patnaik 27 September 2009

dear hebert....this is a beautiful poem after my heart.i agree, that we should make our today good, and who knows about tomorrow.a positive and inspiring poem and very refreshing.10++++

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 16 August 2009

this is my favorite and most piercing line of all...it speaks to me 'Different seasons will come and go, come and go The perennial plants hibernate and grow Mother Earth will claim her children’s dust and sand And their spirit will perpetually wander like the wind.' keep writing^^

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Ninya Zulueta 13 August 2009

At times, the magnets are mightily powerful Pessimism is not the answer to the realities Of our journey, the bouquet of the lilies Will not remain fresh and youthful. very nice. very positive. you are inspiring.

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Tonia Nkeangnyi 10 August 2009

Beautiful poem. really touching.

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Beauty Philosophy 06 August 2009

Nice poem! your message is clear!

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Bele Lele 06 August 2009

So very true, keep up the good work!

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Whisperkwane Lamb 06 August 2009

TOMORROW WILL COME...and the brids and bees will inpregnate nature... in it's on way...there is no future...as we see it...but what of tomorrow... A begining Sun...yes I agree...the future is on the run... You have good mind site....thanks for sharing...

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Ashley Perez 05 August 2009

Great poem i understand the message you ar egiving your so right

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Hanna Sara 04 August 2009

if there's no future in this world... i want to spend my full day to enjoy it... i won't think about tomorrow.. just want to enjoy all that i have..

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Ted M 01 August 2009

Tommorrow may never come. Make the most of today. Be good and have a nice life. Well said.

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Jazza Bella 26 July 2009

This was awsome. People don't realize that you have to live each day as it is the last. You may think you now what the future is. But fate has it's own mind. Really enjoyed this.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 26 July 2009

Really, I don't like negative titles. But if I will base it on how the poem was written, I say it's good.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 26 July 2009

What you want to do tomorrow, do it today. What you want to do today, do it now. This is what a practical man would say and you are saying the same nicely in this poem.

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Sherif Monem 26 July 2009

Very nicely written, little bit magnifying death. If you down play it a notch. The heaven’s hole is infinitesimal and active 'active' is not clear what is meant. if you search another word. great job as a whole.

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beautiful tan plus. keep writing.

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