Different seasons will come and go, come and go
The bee humming birds fly away and don’t always return
The perennial plants hibernate and grow
Bigger branches and buds that make men yearn.
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dear hebert....this is a beautiful poem after my heart.i agree, that we should make our today good, and who knows about tomorrow.a positive and inspiring poem and very refreshing.10++++
this is my favorite and most piercing line of all...it speaks to me 'Different seasons will come and go, come and go The perennial plants hibernate and grow Mother Earth will claim her children’s dust and sand And their spirit will perpetually wander like the wind.' keep writing^^
At times, the magnets are mightily powerful Pessimism is not the answer to the realities Of our journey, the bouquet of the lilies Will not remain fresh and youthful. very nice. very positive. you are inspiring.
TOMORROW WILL COME...and the brids and bees will inpregnate nature... in it's on way...there is no future...as we see it...but what of tomorrow... A begining Sun...yes I agree...the future is on the run... You have good mind site....thanks for sharing...
Great poem i understand the message you ar egiving your so right
if there's no future in this world... i want to spend my full day to enjoy it... i won't think about tomorrow.. just want to enjoy all that i have..
Tommorrow may never come. Make the most of today. Be good and have a nice life. Well said.
This was awsome. People don't realize that you have to live each day as it is the last. You may think you now what the future is. But fate has it's own mind. Really enjoyed this.
Really, I don't like negative titles. But if I will base it on how the poem was written, I say it's good.
What you want to do tomorrow, do it today. What you want to do today, do it now. This is what a practical man would say and you are saying the same nicely in this poem.
Very nicely written, little bit magnifying death. If you down play it a notch. The heaven’s hole is infinitesimal and active 'active' is not clear what is meant. if you search another word. great job as a whole.
when i read this... i realize something in my life... huh! what a great poem hebert... keep writing... ;)