Tomorrow.....Tomorrow Comments

Tomorrow I shall seize every chance that I come my way And never wait for them to fall on another day Tomorrow I shall be out of my prison cell with discord round And shall enter a palace with joys abound.. Wonderful positive notes and decisions.. this is an eye-opener for the readers. i take a lot for my life from this poem. thank you dear Prof. Valsa. tony

A beautiful poem with positive hopes has been so impressively and aptly delineated. I mark the following lines much impressive. Tomorrow I shall seize every chance that I come my way And never wait for them to fall on another day Tomorrow I shall be out of my prison cell with discord round And shall enter a palace with joys abound. Thanks.10

Powerful closing. A beautiful poem is rendered. Thank You.

this poem is so pleasant to read I've have bookmarked it so as to re-read thanksValsa

Do whatever that need to be done for today for tomorrow may not get here. If tomorrow happens to appear then try to spread some bounteous cheer. A very thoughtful write.

An excellent poem, Valsa, which completely mesmerized me! Each para' is pregnant with wonderful meaning and rhyme scheme is alluring! The twist in the last couple of lines enhances the beauty of the poem! KUDOS!

tomorrow is another day. do so today for tomorrow may not be.

Tomorrow is another day... Aren't these the concluding words of Gone with the Wind?

Tomorrows would sure break its silence and gloom, cheer herself up to welcome you to those cherished lawns of desires, hopes and delights. Yesterdays, Today and Tomorrows all are from the same genre, So, not there much to be of panic yet. Desires, Resolutions and even Oaths might well be glittering well, when the garland of a new born day is blessed by the Soul's content. I whisper off the bad omen descended on your blessed verses '“Your resolutions sound so good, but what if tomorrow doesn’t arise? ” God Bless

Tomorrow I shall willingly partake of another’s grief...ha ha.. I felt so when you expressed your concern and grief when my poem hunter forum page got crashed. Your tomorrow is your yesterday Madam Valsa.

Why put off tomorrow what you can put off today! ! Lovely write Valsa.

the life's little joys and sorrow juxtaposed, , , and joy wins over sorrow, , ,

when beauty is here here, beauty of a..... I shall slow down and stop by the mountain side And watch the silvery stream, joyfully down way glide

We always have lot of hope that something will be better tomorrow. That is natural and let's us live. Beautiful poem.

Dont worry, today...........today

where to wait where to grab skilfully expressed. Nice pooem.

so very beautiful.. the last line is a teaser!

Dont care for what someone says, just have faith in goodness...in the grammar of our lives, the construction of ourpersonality structure might go wrong by adding this......WHAT IF....Your resolutions are gripping n strong, dont allow someone else to break this positivity....