Friday, January 25, 2008

Tomorrow's Memory Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I rememberd what
I was supposed to forget

Hidden, somewhere between
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Bonnie Collins
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Subbaraman N V 05 March 2008

What a great and sound reality of life! A nice write! Congratulations!

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Emancipation Planz 03 February 2008

Your opening is a poignant introduction 'Today I rememberd what.. I was supposed to forget'... of 'oh dears' and 'never mind'... following by hysterical laughter.....

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Alison Cassidy 02 February 2008

'But living for today, will make tomorrows memory.......' And living for today is all you can do, anyway. A poignant, thoughtful poem about life and impermanence and the blurred line between each breath we take. love Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Joseph Enright 01 February 2008

I love it.Just printed it off.Gonna share it at the next poetry gathering.Keep at it.Joe Enright

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Jen Ann Wingfield 28 January 2008

good write! life is full of memories and yes we all tend to forget things just as easy as we dream!

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

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