Monday, March 26, 2018

Tomorrow, Lesser Sorrow, Beloved Comments

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Tomorrow lesser sorrow, beloved
never be melancholic
after months of rains
our mind be drained
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 27 March 2018

Tomorrow's first sun will arrive and this will be future and while we'll arrive in tomorrow we'll feel present light of mercy of God through nature. Trust in self completely motivates mind. Beauty attracts attention. But light is wisdom that removes sorrow and better tomorrow is expected. Every present moment receives grace of God. Beauty rejuvenates. Beauty revives values in heart and this gives immense joy. Excellent work! ...rating..10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 April 2018

You give me hope, dear Dr. Pintu Mahakul, that a poem written easily rhyming and with simple words, can also be that joyful for others, like you, if I may mention. Yes, every present moment receives grace of God. Thank you that you do understand this simple poem. Thank you for the 10 too. My heart is singing now (I ever said that I cannot sing, but my heart does) . Your words means a very lot to me. God's Blessings.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 27 March 2018

This beautiful card designed is completely moving with mind and this is mesmerizing. Natural beauty is perfectly captured with golden pearls of time. Tomorrow may never come. This is today that is shining here with mercy and beauty of God. Sweet heart believes in smartness. Sorrow goes so far and beauty motivates mind. There will be lesser sorrow in tomorrow if we design our today and present moment in peace.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 April 2018

You have captured that all so well, Dr. Pinbtu Mahakul. I am touched by you comprehending this simple poem but needs deeper thoughts. Thank you! Also for the rating 10.

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Valsa George 27 March 2018

A poem of shining hope and great consolation! To one beset with the sorrows of life, what else could be more comforting than the assurance or hope that tomorrow will be one of lesser sorrow and greater joy! This thought will help us wade through the mires and reach the grassy meadows of life! A poem charged with the electrons of positive affirmation!

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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