Sunday, July 6, 2008

! Tomorrow Is Another Day Comments

Rating: 2.9

I turn around and walk away -
Tomorrow is another day,
The past is done, I've closed the book,
I'll never take another look;
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Linda Ori
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Greenwolfe 1962 12 July 2008

I gave this one an 8 as well. Another recommendation. The rhymes were more simple in this poem and therefore the poem itself was, I thought at least, a little less than it might have been. The sentiment seemed to be less intense than it needed to be. Other than that, I found nothing to find fault with. GW62

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James B. Earley 08 July 2008

Is life simply a quest for the unattainable? And tomorrow....is....another day!

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Kesav Easwaran 06 July 2008

'A broken heart will surely mend - Some loves will last, and some will end, And I will play the game again Because I know one day I'll win' life is essentially a love game...the lines above give the basic rule for playing that game...the poem declares brave optimism

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Anita Atina 06 July 2008

Brave poem Linda! Loved the attitude

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Thad Wilk 06 July 2008

Tomorrow is another day, 'tis exactly as you say *10*! ! The past, now you have closed the book Tomorrow you'll take a closer look Deeply Into your new loves eyes And you will find true loves (not blind) True love you can't disguise! Splendid read Linda Friend Thad

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Bob Gibson 06 July 2008

Brilliant poem Linda, i just wish my heart was made that way! regards Bob!

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