Saturday, April 3, 2010

Tomorrow In The Army Comments

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The sun shine brightly
As I walk down the street
I am no longer to be taken lightly
For my life is no longer bleak
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Elisha De La Rosa
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Ryan Walker 03 April 2010

I loved this poem on my first read, and the second and third reads were even better. Lots of emotion put into this poem and its clearly evident there is an underlying cause to it. (im only guessing though: D) Great work, keep writing strong.

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Elisha De La Rosa

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