Thursday, September 25, 2008

Tomorrow I Will Be Happy Comments

Rating: 4.9

Small child dressed shabbily,
His eyes dusty, hair shaggy.
'When I will grow big,
I would have sweets many,
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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

'When I will grow big, I would have sweets many, I would play throughout the day, Rachel Ann Butler

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Pandian Angelina 28 August 2009

Hitesh laughs at human folly And Hitesh cries in pity! It used to be humour alone But, today you also made us Stop, think and weep For our own ignorance and foolishness! Angel

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Duh Huh 05 July 2009

Thats why we have to squeeze every single second of joy out of life. Time is so fleeting. Very well expressed. Thank you for sharing your talent :)

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think that i read already this beautiful poem..enjoy it..10++++++++++

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Naidz Ladia 14 May 2009

this poem is a proof that children bear no worries..as we grow, responsibilities increase..we have to do this, we have to do that...but growing old is a sign of many improvement, many achievements....so, still, we are proud of the good things we did during our younger days...cheers dear....life is beautiful if we know how to live...naizz

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Antonio Liao 07 April 2009

oh! what great things happened to me...reading your wonderful poem...it gives sense of what is HOPE in the deepest defination....in a poem like this many would then see the beauty of what will be will be....I do like the tunes very astonishing view of life and dream...Thank you my friend your such a very poet..God bless...a 10+

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Sonya Florentino 15 March 2009

ha ha, if you can't be happy now, forget about tomorrow! tongue in cheek but quite realistic!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 February 2009

The core philosophy of life so beautifully portrayed. Somewhat near in thought to my old poems 'Pages' and 'Driftwoods' Very well thought and composed.

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I see many on the TV and in the movies so happy but they are actors I see many at work and around me happy too but they are also actors.. with their easy smile and ready made laugh happy comes from the inside when you can stand naked before the world and you have nothing to hide and nothing to fear......10

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Nandhini .... 09 November 2008

H a haha Nice poem DR, Very clearly shows today is the day to be happy & enjoy.. You never know wa tom holds for you...

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I hope tomorrow you will be happy great read

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