Saturday, June 22, 2019

Tomorrow Comes Only If………… Comments

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He planned for everything and waited for tomorrow
Each day his planning was fine-tuned, but for tomorrow
He thought life has many tomorrows for him
Days turned to years and in decades
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 11 September 2020

Tomorrow never comes. Do it today itself. Profound message..

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 August 2019

Today is what you have Never postpone good deeds Asim ji, this is absolutely true, I have seen many who postpone good deeds.I had a relative who lived a frugal and stingy life, though very rich and died too miserably. So important to be charitable while you live. Excellent poem......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2019

This is truly realized that today is more powerful than tomorrow. We feel the importance of present time. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 August 2019

A wonderful thought provoking poem on tomorrows and how it is linked in a series to today. Yes we shouldn't wait to do good deeds tomorrow, for then it never comes. Kudos.! Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

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Kostas Lagos 25 July 2019

The significance of present...Well written

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2019

Today is what you have! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 July 2019

Today is more powerful than tomorrow Today is what you have 'Never postpone good deeds Tomorrow comes when today is taken care off Tomorrow comes when you slog, today Today is the beginning and tomorrow is the continuity ' - Truth and Wisdom in each of these lines! This poem has that necessary motivational power of opening one's eyes to the philosophy of living. Very much loved reading it!

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A very poignant write Asim ji. We can plan for tomorrow but who knows whether there will be a tomorrow at all. It is best to concentrate on the present.........Beautiful 10

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 June 2019

Tomorrow comes when today is taken care off Tomorrow comes when you slog, today... Well said. Yes, all a man has is today, the present moment,

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 June 2019

Today, if you sow a seed tomorrow you will see a plant......this is the fact none can deny it! A pragmatic write.........10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 June 2019

Planning for everything from previously is definitely very nice. A good planning gives success. Tomorrow is uncertain but when there is good planning there is chance of getting success. This poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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