Saturday, July 5, 2008

Tomorrow Comments

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Tomorrow it will have been six years
since you so very positively stated
I know there will be no more tears
Tomorrow, you said, will be celebrated
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Jane 92 04 October 2008

wow! great poem i love it 'Forgive the tears shed now and then ' perfect choice of words keep on writing: D

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Kris Smith 25 August 2008

Treasured memories stay with us they seem to give us solace and an inner peace that we can hang on to, the leaving of loved ones is always hard to bear but the memories are always there. Tenderly written piece and nice of you to share 10 Chris

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 04 August 2008

quite an emotional poem, love it

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Rema Prasanna 05 July 2008

Heartfelt, a very touching write.. Very emotive and a cloud of sadness and tender sorrow in those lines... Tia you wrote it in a way to conquer hearts... Rema

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blue 802 05 July 2008

How nice, the last line, very deep piece, love this one Tom

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