Tuesday, January 24, 2017

Tomorrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

I went searching for the sunshine;
I could not take the winter cold.
The silver moon deceived my vision;
the sun became my only gold.
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Dimitrios Galanis 26 January 2017

Hope as our permanent dream nicely depicted, Barry.

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Barry Middleton 26 January 2017

Often what we seek is right in front of us. Thanks for the comment.

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Nosheen Irfan 25 January 2017

A real poetic gem. A smooth flow of feelings n words ending on a hopeful note. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 25 January 2017

Thanks Nosheen for reading, commenting and the generous rating.

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Dimitrios Galanis 24 January 2017

Real poetic point of feeling the world we experience!

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Barry Middleton 25 January 2017

Thanks Dimitrios, I always appreciated your comments.

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