Thursday, June 28, 2012

Tomorrow Comments

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I dream of flying in the sky
with my arms wide open
coming through clouds
whenever I want to see you, I do
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Elena Sandu 12 July 2012

Moving forward tomorrow to feel the same dream over and over again could not be easy. But tomorrow will be a special day for which please let me sing and say: In luck one dream for you may came true Happy Birthday to you, happy birthday to you Happy birthday dear Wabi Sabi Happy birthday to you! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 July 2012

a beautiful poem. the arrival of a friend is seen through the window, the presence of that thing is around us..Let it be anything..even if it is a tomorrow..thought provoking thought! !

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Unwritten Soul 28 June 2012

Last stanza is the best one, but the whole poem is a nice poem....I f we can fly over the time and places we will reach anywhere without any constrain...and enjoy the life so beautifully...there will be no boundaries and with no limit, to reach any one who close to heart, anywhere...from Japan to India then Malaysia, before America, Europe, Middle east, Africa, Algeria, Australia and Asian....but now we are here to stay in touch without physically flying just word and heart attach to all_Unwritten Soul

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