Thursday, October 23, 2008

Tomorrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

How do you feel?
Is all this real?
I hate to talk and that is how,
I’ll feel the same tomorrow as I do now,
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Robert Siney
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Vinod Kumar 03 January 2009

Good composition I really enjoy. Thanks for sharing.

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David Threadgold 23 October 2008

Hi Robert. very well put together piece and rhyming well all the way through. just as I like to read my poetry. thanks for a good read 10/10 Regards Dave T

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Norma Southwood 23 October 2008

Hopelessness and despair described well.

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