Monday, July 17, 2006

Tommy By (Gina Maria Ann Lux) Or Mum For Short Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Children were playing
On a hot summers day
In a field near the river
Among sweet smelling hay
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COMMENTS
Sandra Hillawi 04 February 2012

Lovely engaging and heart touching story... Sandra: -)

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Ernestine Northover 18 July 2006

This is a sweet read, a lovely story with a happy ending, which is nice. A delightful write. Love Ernestine XXX

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Lynda Robson 18 July 2006

A lovely story told in rhyme, you have the knack of bringing it all to life, well-done Love Lynda xx

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NEVER UNDERESTIMATE THE SUPERNALICS OF ANGELS & SERIPHS....THEIR FORCE, SO SUBTLE& UNPALPABLE, YET POWERED WITH ETHEREAL INFLUENCE&PRIVILEDGE... GREAT STORY, THAT IS MORE THAN JUST A SYORY...'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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