Wednesday, March 4, 2009

``````~~~tommorrow Weeps....! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.3

someone stood upon my doorstep
weeping in the torrential rain
shuddering as winds bit
into its blue bulging veins
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 March 2009

Such is the condition of our present world that tomorrow weeps.......... Good Write.........10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 18 March 2009

good inspired write...truthful words, Wardha...thanks 10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 March 2009

A revelation indeed.....Apprehension of tomorrow.....A poignant write..... Deserves 10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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what a graphic prelude of “skin alabaster cobwebbed with vessels eyes ochre laden with sadness” with a spine-tingling finale “it looked upon my unlined face” Just booooootiful budzz

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