Tuesday, April 12, 2005

Tom Did Not Make It Comments

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And it rained so much that Spring day
that all the angels did run out of tears.
Tom was a tiny little tomato plant,
a real runt, cute but with a hunchback,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Linda Preston 13 April 2005

This poem is really deep and meaningful! A well told tale and brilliant descriptions of nature. You really are a great writer of epic poems.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 April 2005

Ooops, I forgot, Allan he is a one giver as well. H

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 April 2005

All; an what did I tell you? Here (s) he thought we would fall for it. One of their biggest problems is that they think they can mix it with the real people. They are too dumb to notice that they are too dumb. It's really bizarre. H

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Allan James Saywell 12 April 2005

The mind of herbert must be a wonderful place to reside, and to think with all the pressure you have been under and you come and write this great piece of poetry, i might be a bad judge of poetry, but a lot of young boys will get a lot of pleasure out of this poem, i read it twice and i will read it again and again Warm regards my friend

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