Token Of Gratitude Comments

Dheron Daad 5******

Very true. Unless we surrender to the wishes of Almighty we roam without radar. Profound poem.

Beautiful, evocative, simple and sincere poem. Well expressed and crafted.

Five stars. It is a pity that I can't rate this poem with more stars

We have to go with the flow, even when nothing makes sense.

Typos: There are some inadvertent typographical errors. Please correct them. I take this poignant poem to my favourite...top score!

Hardly a few can delve deep into the essence of this prayer. I find the representation of troubled tortured souls through your poem. It's easy to present happiness of others but difficult to potroy their agony unless a poet feels their pains. You are doing a wonderful job. Keep writing!