Togetherness Song Comments

A beautiful message conveyed about love in this poem. Well done!

Very well crafted with beautiful words on togetherness as love 10+++

In the strong Softness of Beloved Please don't leave My love, don't go... beautiful loving song; nice to read; congrats for being selected again this poem as POD

Love is mysterious status of mind varieties there are the colors of feelings dawn to dusk, night to day everywhere it varies the mind differently love can give leave but can't give leave forever love wants to enjoy all colors thru the happy and sorrow time like the afterglow love wants to absorb every unseen existence of colorful unsteady mind

Love; even if it leaves us, it lives in our hearts 'in the afterglow'!

Yes this is very wonderful song short and sweet

It is what the world needs now. Togetherness. Thank you

The opening two stanzas are really catchy and poetically expressed. Good luck with this song and congratulations on Poem of the Day...

Very nice and sweet love poem. So nicely written, with delicate tones and perfumed heart beat.

beautiful loving poem, nice love expressed /// don't go don't go o love don't go these all love for you o love don't go ..............////

Wonderful song on togetherness. Congrats on poem of the day.

A very beautiful love poem that makes interesting reading for the intensity of love that flows in the lines. Simple and beautiful. Congrats.

Please don't leave My love, don't go..Strenght of true love is expressed in these simple words. Many many congratulations having been featured in POD

Hustle and bustle of life! ! True love, Please don't go away! ! ! ! Don't leave me lonely. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The first two lines are repeated at the end emphasing the importance of togetherness! A lovely poem so tenderly expressed! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

Perfect cadence, perfect phrasing.... superb poem.10+

How I wish to listen to the melody of this love song, Butch. Congrats on your featured poem...10++++

A fantastic love song insisting the loved one to stay with in the after glow. Thanks for sharing a life song of togetherness.10 points.