Togetherness Comments

the days were happy when they met on the flapping wings of time romance smiled touching the stalk of life photography mind snapped the beauty of youth on the page of memory on the anthology of expression all were exposed for two flying souls shameless divine body played all subconsciously now, it's the afternoon of life wanna to have some taste of rapturous unity with the waving ripple of poetic harmony

A nice piece of 's life :)

Colour of my life! ! Framed with the muse of my works. Musing along with your mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is a very nice piece =] I love a strong narrative. There are two typos - line 2 = it'sreversed are run together first long paragraph, line 3 afocus are run together Otherwise this is a VERY good first piece - congratulations nephew =]

Its a lovely story of what lovers do and the mood swings blamed on the weather or rather caused by the weather. A normal love day for normal loves. Good one