Saturday, June 13, 2009

Together We Live. Comments

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Kearbear pie lover 21 June 2009

this is my favorite poem of yours i put it on my favorite poem list =) I LOVE YOUR POEMS =) -Kearbear your poetry buddy

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Very descriptive. And a really nice poem! I love how you used the scene on the beach to display your topic.

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DaNa XxX 13 June 2009

hey will, this is a brillent poem...! ! i liked it! ..i really can feel the Passion between the lines.. great job! ..^_^

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