Thursday, May 11, 2023

Together - Parallel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yours is the night with shining stars
Mine is the day with twinkling eyes
You sleep to dream
I remain awake in hope
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M. Asim Nehal
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David Wood 12 May 2023

Inspirational poem. Love, life togetherness un such bliss.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 May 2023

Amazing--just Amazing! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 11 May 2023

Brilliant....as always..... thanks a lot.....

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S H 11 May 2023

Night 🌙 to day 🌞 then dreams 😴 and hope 🙏 how well u connected yet say parallel and together. Brilliant idea.

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A meaningful poem. Very inspiring. To my favorites.

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Brilliant thoughts woven in a beautiful poem. Contrast makes life complete, interesting and wonderful!

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Rajan T Renganathan 11 May 2023

How beautifully you have explained the role of two in your own way. Like two banks of the river, like two legs both work in tandem. Sweet poem.

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