Together..... My Love And I Comments

1 - 1 - i bet i can do better here than that (other) creepy (ha ha) " Brian" ! stanza 1: Interesting use of " depose" . stanza 3: my favorite...so far stanza 4: i'd redo first two lines a bit stanza 5: favorite line: " His kisses are songs for which my heart longs" stanza 6: ok, but... stanza 7: good, but i'd tweak it NOW do you see why i've been divorced x3?

Such beautiful heartwarming poem. For those together in love nothing else matters. Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem.

Hope your love is not afraid of heights! This is indeed a soaring poem! : -)

Yes Lora, love is such a powerhouse within, that you so wonderfully paint.