Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Together Forever Comments

Rating: 4.4

You never have to leave now
I don't have to travel to you
You don't have to hide
I don't have to miss you ever
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Vivek Haldar
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Poetheart Morgan 03 October 2012

hummmmmm! Very good, beautiful! ! ! Like it! ! !

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 October 2011

Love is eternal, it transcends life it's self... Beautiful poem...

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Sylvia Carter 27 October 2011

This is lovely, You can Love someone and nothing can change your mind. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Hans Vr 23 October 2011

Beautifully put in melodious verses. Well done. Now effort and wisdom is required to make it a happy ever after.

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Fragments Of Light And Love 22 October 2011

that is very true...when your are together, there is no room for wandering but rather enjoy the presence of each one...

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Vivek Haldar 20 October 2011

Vivek Haldar (10/20/2011 2: 21: 00 AM) | Delete this message From: Louis Borgo (shelby United States; Male; 23) To: Vivek Haldar Date Time: 10/19/2011 5: 27: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: together forever great stuff i would luv to here more length on yout poems it would make it more interesting?

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Poet Of The River 19 October 2011

short and to the sweet point. good job.

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Young Church Poetry 19 October 2011

Wow beautiful, very romantic. I am inspired to get married soon, well done.

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Dylan Gaudreault 18 October 2011

i like this one, i believe in the meaning behind it

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Vipins Puthooran 18 October 2011

It's a nice poem...the words of one who fall in love again... Well writtten..

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Dave Walker 18 October 2011

A great poem. About been in love and together. Great write.

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