Together Forever Poem by Vivek Haldar

Together Forever

Rating: 4.4


You never have to leave now
I don't have to travel to you
You don't have to hide
I don't have to miss you ever
You don't have to call me anymore
We are together now
we are together forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vivek Haldar 20 October 2011

Vivek Haldar (10/20/2011 2: 21: 00 AM) | Delete this message From: Louis Borgo (shelby United States; Male; 23) To: Vivek Haldar Date Time: 10/19/2011 5: 27: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: together forever great stuff i would luv to here more length on yout poems it would make it more interesting?

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Poet Of The River 19 October 2011

short and to the sweet point. good job.

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Young Church Poetry 19 October 2011

Wow beautiful, very romantic. I am inspired to get married soon, well done.

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Dylan Gaudreault 18 October 2011

i like this one, i believe in the meaning behind it

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Vipins Puthooran 18 October 2011

It's a nice poem...the words of one who fall in love again... Well writtten..

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Poetheart Morgan 03 October 2012

hummmmmm! Very good, beautiful! ! ! Like it! ! !

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 October 2011

Love is eternal, it transcends life it's self... Beautiful poem...

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Sylvia Carter 27 October 2011

This is lovely, You can Love someone and nothing can change your mind. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Hans Vr 23 October 2011

Beautifully put in melodious verses. Well done. Now effort and wisdom is required to make it a happy ever after.

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Fragments Of Light And Love 22 October 2011

that is very true...when your are together, there is no room for wandering but rather enjoy the presence of each one...

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