Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Together Forever Comments

Rating: 4.5

Side by side,
Heart to heart,
Mind in mind,
Never apart,
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Jodie Louise Pollock
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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2015

I've just read this beautiful poem of yours and loved it. I am amazed at how beautifully you have spoken your mind with so simple words and short lines. Particularly the last two lines touched me: 'Us and we, Forever and ever.' I have a poem titled 'You And Me'. Should you make some time to read that piece, I would be much obliged.

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Kerli Undead 08 February 2009

long and romantic <333 one of the best peoms i've read ~Kerli

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