Friday, December 28, 2007

Together Apart Comments

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We're together...
But apart!
Together in body,
Apart in heart.
...
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Donall Dempsey 03 January 2008

Sad and tender but very beautiful... love the refrain of together/apart. love Donall Donall

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I know that feeling, from long ago, and you express it perfectly. t x

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Mary Gordley 28 December 2007

Nicely written though I am sorry for the pain you feel. Life tends to take us through cycles and perhaps it will bring you back to the love you desire.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 28 December 2007

very sad and moving a good poem

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