Saturday, September 27, 2008

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So you press your lips to mine
And breathe a breath of new life into me.
Pulling me back when hope was slowly sifting away.
You become the fire,
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Aimee Nell
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James Timothy Jarrett 27 September 2008

Very powerful writing. I can feel the quivering truth and emotion under every word.

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