Monday, July 19, 2021

Together 🤲 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a petal of the blooming flower.

I am the thread of a nicely stitched cloth.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Anjandev Roy 28 January 2023

Marvelous piece..... lovely to read...thank u, dear friend..

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S H 23 July 2021

This is another way of thinking.

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We are together..

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 July 2021

Together in love is a wonderful state to be in. Beautiful poem! To my Poem List.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 July 2021

I love the first line

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 July 2021

Each and every line stands out. A poem of great depth. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 July 2021

Sometimes beautiful things come in small packages. This marvelous short write is one of them.

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Juhaina Tumlu 21 July 2021

To stay together is bliss. Great philosophical poem. Simple and meaningful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2021

I am the thread.... expression with great philosophical depth!

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Michael Jack 20 July 2021

I liked it: I am a page of your life's book.

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Shreya Hacks 20 July 2021

To remain together is a bliss. Fantastic poem.

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Shakira Nandini 20 July 2021

If you are a body, I am your soul. If you are wind, then I am your whisper. Very high poem This poem of yours made me a poet

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 July 2021

Acceptance is the true essence of life. No matter wherever we are we never stop loving. Beautiful poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 July 2021

I am a page of your life's book. Sweetest utterance this morn, feel very flattered, am imaginning that I am reading this with myriad other Poem Hunter members, but it feels so personal, excellent poem, Mr. ASim Sir! 5 Stars full on Top

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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