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When I see the world, for you
When you became the world to me
A rainbow arched beyond the storms
To green pastures of destiny
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What a wonderful collection of inpirational words. I love the lines. you are a rare gem.
this is such a good poem, i truely felt it as i read it, very powerful and touching!
I just love this poem! Not only that I am a believer of destiny, I am also a fanatic of eternal love. Not only that you created an image of true and selfless love, you also showed that a man can be strong at the same time very romantic. Thank you for sharing such a very inspiring and uplifting poem.
i love all your work but this really shows a lot of love and faith. i love to see that in a person. please keep writing, i absolutely love reading your work.
I see FAITH, hope, dreams... I also saw a romantic part of you... An inspiring read to start the morning with! ! ! Thanks,
Well written Kelly! Togetherness on this journey And it's not so heavy hand-in-hand Walk towards the eternity with a singsong?
The rainbow arched beyond the storm-Great poem, great line. Wow1 This rocks. Gave it a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.
this poem is beautiful...it's been a long time since I read poetry that actually caused a lift in my spirits...thanks for that, i needed it today... Always, Amberlee
Absolutely beautiful! I can certainly identify with what you say here, Kelly. Eventually destiny graces us with the perfect union - if we are patient enough to wait for the right time. Heartfelt and heartwarming. Linda
A write full of devotion, admiration and love. So beauitfuly worded...... Simply beautiful.
Sounds very nice this poem Kelly, like you already found your pot of gold, hold on to it, nice write Dave...........................................: -)
what an awsome write here finely worded and well structured....nicely done
togetherness in hope, promise and love.....beautifully written
Love in all its glory eternally, beautiful write. All the best, Diane
This is 'terrific'! Did you lift THIS 'off' my desk? ? did you? LOL... Kelly, wow~! That's all this poem deserves! I give it a WOW! Nice. L
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7/23/2025 11:01:54 AM # 1.0.0
Powerful, hopeful, wonderful... loved it Kelly Best... CJ