Thursday, December 21, 2017

Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

TOGETHERNESS
Looking like blossoming sprouts
Nourished by the same water and ground
Heated between sun and cloud
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Houda Boukassoula
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Hazel Durham 29 December 2017

A beautiful, deep write that we are all on a journey of our own making, to be nourished by positivity and faith!

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Houda Boukassoula 01 January 2018

Thanks a lot dear Hazel Durham, a very insightful comment

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2017

A deep sigh can release the sorrow At the end of a tunnel we see a glow When together not alone we choose where togo.......simply soooooo fine a poem.. it goes to the heart when i read your poem.. your poetic talents are great........ thank you dear poetes.. please write and write..... tony

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Akhtar Jawad 21 December 2017

The two ends of the tunnel, but lucky to see a glow at the exit tunnel. Thoughtful poem.

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Houda Boukassoula 22 December 2017

Thanks a lot

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Kusum Gala 21 December 2017

At the end of the tunnel we see the glow..I like it. Keep writing.

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Houda Boukassoula 22 December 2017

Thanks for the encouragement, pleased that you liked my poem

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