Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before she could speak, Their lips are together
His lips were warm, And soft as a feather
She closes her eyes, Her heart skips a beat
She feels his warm hands on her, Shivers come from her feet
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Alexis Gallagher
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

Good poem. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. I loved the way you composed the poem. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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Alexis Gallagher

Alexis Gallagher

Grand Island, Nebraska
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