Where are you? Late again.
I am here. I am with a friend.
Where do you go? When the winds blow
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I say 'forgiveness' and trying to work things out is a good theme of a poem. Your poem is good! 10++++
This made me think. You are very good with words, and a storyteller it would also seem. Good job and keep it up.
togetherness is what I see in this poem again please keep writing your poetry 10/10
sophia dont know what shes talking about. 'appreciatable attempt' no it was a great success. i like your style and the way you write. keep up the great work.
WOOOOOWWWWW.. THIS POEM IS THE S*** REAL TALK i love it it kept me on edge And i love the ending it went right along with the follow up. GREAT POEM!