Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where are you? Late again.
I am here. I am with a friend.

Where do you go? When the winds blow
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Stephanie Starr
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Jeffrey Knox 11 August 2009

WOOOOOWWWWW.. THIS POEM IS THE S*** REAL TALK i love it it kept me on edge And i love the ending it went right along with the follow up. GREAT POEM!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 01 August 2009

I say 'forgiveness' and trying to work things out is a good theme of a poem. Your poem is good! 10++++

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Oliver Coleman 30 July 2009

This made me think. You are very good with words, and a storyteller it would also seem. Good job and keep it up.

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togetherness is what I see in this poem again please keep writing your poetry 10/10

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Keith Hendrickson 29 July 2009

sophia dont know what shes talking about. 'appreciatable attempt' no it was a great success. i like your style and the way you write. keep up the great work.

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Sophia Hayyat 29 July 2009

appreciatable attempt considering your age...keep it up!

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