Thursday, June 11, 2009

Together Comments

Rating: 2.8

Hold on tight
Bumpy ride
Cold at night
Hold on tight
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SharonAnn Dawson
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Savita Tyagi 01 February 2015

lovely presentation. enjoyed very much this heart to heart conversation.

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Lyn Paul 01 February 2015

I too loved the flow of these words. Thank you

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Kim Barney 01 February 2015

Very nice, but you might want to change line five to spread YOUR wings.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 February 2015

very nice.loved the flow and concept.

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Valerie Dohren 18 April 2012

Lovely poem - concise and well written.

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