Wednesday, May 27, 2009

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Ever since the 6th grade, I've had a crush on you
You never knew until I told you
When she read a poem about you, I was scared
She could have told you about it
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Ashle Williams
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Shekhar Joshi 27 May 2009

innocent and sweet. i can identify with it.having a crush which remains a crush unless u do something for it. a good poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 27 May 2009

Sort of like the sunrise of love

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Bonnie Collins 27 May 2009

This filled with so very much innocence, that places a warm smile on the readers face, as there is nothing warmer the the innocence of love.......Precious......

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