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That was just amazing. I absolutely loved it. My ex-gf wants to be with me again, and yet sometimes I just don't know, I think I still love her though. And your poem just spoke to me. Awesome.

such a heartfely written poem...Thanks for the enjoyable read i had! ! ! 10

As cliched as it is...'You go girl', amazing write! , Write 'til your fingers bleed, write 'til you have no words left at all - keep on writing! ! !

Nicely written, full of emotions and thoughts.

Totally. I wrote a poem entitled 'The Turn'. Your poem is so much more involved though. You totally say it as it really is! Nice work. Deborah Cromer

very beautiful and touching write, voted10 surya

a very good write! expressions feelings very well 10+

Nice way to express your self you got to make this a little shorter You made some error like (lieing...should be lied) (ma should be I am) and other errors but good work top marks from me keep writing ok... thanks....

I fully understand this. So sad but he's missing out definately. I know that you're a way better person now....wonderful poem -Tyease