Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Together Comments

Rating: ★5.0

They found each other, a perfect fit like two turtle doves in flight.
When he held her, her heart fluttered with anticipation ever so slight.
Her full red lips where the colour of strawberries and complimented her skin an off white cream.
He gazed at her afraid to break contact like he was captured in a dream.
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Sarah Mc Cabe
perfect colour
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Akram Awadat 19 May 2009

very nice poem, well done thanks for sharing

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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

a wonderful write...nice flow and to read..lovely indeed...10

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Mike Matsuda 06 May 2009

I really like this poem. The last couplet is my favorite part

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