Monday, January 25, 2010

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Rating: 5.0

she got up from sleep to share a bed,
memories are blurry and the guilt not shared,
such an happening is not exclusively rared,
they would have known if they only cared.
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rinki nandy
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Pedophilia… a world wise menace …very compassionately composed… ‘…dirty childhood impressions have remained, /distances in their ages could not have gained, …' imprints a psychic stigma for rest of life…thanks…for such a humane poetry 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Antonio Liao 26 January 2010

Seems fulfilling...so intense...very suspense and great to imagination... I like the style...something that hold the breathe...thank you and God Bless...a 10 +++++

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