Today, The Sea: (July,12th,2020) Poem by DM W

Today, The Sea: (July,12th,2020)



Today, the sea seems to be
Embellished by melodies of light.
And the waves appear to be
In harmony with the sun.

Saturday, August 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: light,sea,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 08 August 2020

Your last line ' In harmony with the sun.' Does so state the case of observing that most magical dappled effect of dancing light which I find fascinating and never do ignore. So for that ethereal reminder and a fine quatrain to boot, a full score and well deserved. Many thanks for your latest Dominic and keep writing and I'll keep reading. So hang in there and stay cool in these poetic balmy days.

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