Today Some Thing Got Wrong Comments

Mature write and nicely penned...keep on :)

you are twelve days younger to me and in poetry twelve years mature than me hats me great great great poem... liked your style of writing

Nothing is wrong..... infact its 22nd June a longest and hot day.... You r still bird not crow.....and went out castle of blames... Great lines....like it.... Issues are part of life, dont take it seriously...... life is just childish toy and has to be taken for granted..... you are the first and important, else are all secondary