When loneliness calls to the empty heart,
Its echo can be heard by all,
The sound soon reverberates to the soul,
The bitter, painful tears then start to fall
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A wonderfully passionate poem of how the heart has turned from aching hurt to being filled with new found hope, joy, and love. Excellent piece.
A lovely elaborate love poem Lora, thank you for sharing the same. Only one thing I'm to say as I feel, when love is entrusted on somebody and if that person deserts or leaves then this life is in a total shamble or distress up to the end. Nothing can console truly.
indeed Lora, love provides the only cause to live, a purpose to be alive.
Excellent writing enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Ah! One i have no comment on..yet! now to trash this poem! ! ! ! ALL stanzas: check your punctuation. The presence, or lack, of some punctuation marks threw me for a loop. [ i'm here today to reward myself for being a 'good boy' today. Don't let me DOWN! ! ] I often wear a big belt, rivaling that starry one of Orion. If hit by one of " my stars" , you surely would be cryin'! gotta look at another! bri :)