Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Today's Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

When loneliness calls to the empty heart,
Its echo can be heard by all,
The sound soon reverberates to the soul,
The bitter, painful tears then start to fall
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 01 December 2019

Ah! One i have no comment on..yet! now to trash this poem! ! ! ! ALL stanzas: check your punctuation. The presence, or lack, of some punctuation marks threw me for a loop. [ i'm here today to reward myself for being a 'good boy' today. Don't let me DOWN! ! ] I often wear a big belt, rivaling that starry one of Orion. If hit by one of " my stars" , you surely would be cryin'! gotta look at another! bri :)

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Michael Mcparland 26 October 2014

A wonderfully passionate poem of how the heart has turned from aching hurt to being filled with new found hope, joy, and love. Excellent piece.

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Amitava Sur 23 October 2014

A lovely elaborate love poem Lora, thank you for sharing the same. Only one thing I'm to say as I feel, when love is entrusted on somebody and if that person deserts or leaves then this life is in a total shamble or distress up to the end. Nothing can console truly.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 October 2014

indeed Lora, love provides the only cause to live, a purpose to be alive.

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Howard Mcdougal 21 October 2014

Excellent writing enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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Howard Mcdougal 21 October 2014

Excellent pennings thanks for sharing

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Chuy Amante 21 October 2014

Tears of joy are fun to deploy!

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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