Today My Mother Died Comments

Sadness from the loss of a loved one is truly great. Time heals wounds, but some wounds leave scars that will never fade. Good job with the poem, and I wish you well during troublous times. let your grief be an inspiration.

To lose a loved one is something you can't get over simple. When put into words, it's the healing power of words and rhyme that are bound to get the pain off of your heart some. I really enjoyed this one and let me tell you what, you're nothing short of a great female poet and I ain't kidding. Love, Jack

really sad, such a young writer recite her sorrow in a piece of paper.. thanks for sharing..

really sad, such a young writer recite her sorrow in a piece of paper.. thanks for sharing..

yes, i've already read it, but is a pleasure read it again...

this is a really good poem. it makes you feel things, which is what a poem should do. very nice use of words and diction too get the emotions across.

I don't know what made you write this poem, but it was really excellent. keep writin.. al the best..! !

Really a good piece of work. Hats up.

very nice poem i like it, thanks a lot, keep writing

This is awesome and lovely write about poetry the negation came with beauty.

This is awesome and lovely write about poetry the negation came with beauty.

this is a nice heart wrenching write

Wow the emotions and expressions are great in this poem nice piece Krista

This is a truly honest poem in that you now recognize your failure to be perfect. Your mother would have known that you were a certain age and would have understood you. A beautiful expressive poem. Karin Anderson

the emotion showed is naive, true, unartificial. a wonderful write for your age. i appreciate your talents. shan

I love the calm message and emotion showed throughout the poem. The detail is slightly lacking (i wanted more) but the underlying theme is so wonderful and nicely laid that i wouldnt change a thing. The title is powerful, as is the message that your mother died and left not a sign of worry or stress for you, the ultimate sign of a wonderful mother. Very heart warming.

We should be grateful to God when we're in pain, cuz its from Him.Nice poem!

wow this poem is very touching.its relevant to so many people who take their mother for granted.

awwwww thats beautiful and amazing

pretty cool... its probably just me but i kinda got tired of the same rhyme scheme after awhile even though i don't do a good job of that myself i like the remorse in the poem very clear it tells a story :)