Saturday, November 10, 2012

Today Is The Only Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cry not on flowers wilted,
Count not on buds that canker might blight,
But marvel over beauty blossomed!

Extinct are our Yesterdays,
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Valsa George
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

Please read as: we must live

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

But we must love in the present. I appreciated this composition that emphasizes his ideas. Appreciated this excellent poem. Top score.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

A great poem dear madam. This poem tales me to the great Longfellow' s Psalm of life.. where he says, we have already left past and the future is uncertain but

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 April 2019

I like the title of this magnificent poem. It sends a powerful message. Very captivating. Every stanza can be a Mantra that could guide us in our everyday life. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10 +++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 April 2019

An excellent write imbued with wisdom and insight. Each stanza stands out. Very inspiring and highly motivational.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2018

We should marvel over beauty blossomed as beauty motivates mind. There is no need to cry for wilted flowers. There is no need to count the cankers those might blight the bud. Today is a perception. But tomorrow is a stimulation. Every situation in life that comes is joyous and we should celebrate life. Today is our present way to climb up the top of the hill. This poem is a stunning poem and very brilliantly and excellently penned...10

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Sochukwu Ivye 14 October 2017

I just cannot get enough of you. Each time, you happen to me all over again. I'm charged up with this persuading/motivational piece, sweet mentor.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 March 2014

Cry not and count not but marvel over is what yesterday, tomorrow and today is.....so elegantly crafted I am really mesmerised........Valsa.....as usual great write..............

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Elizabeth Kurian Mona Mona 30 January 2013

A beautiful poem with a positive message.Words very well chosen.

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Om Chawla 15 December 2012

'Every Yesterday.....A reminiscence- sweet to relish Every tomorrow.......A vision glorious to chase' Excellently penned. Enjoyed it.

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Jahan Zeb 21 November 2012

Lovely. The concluded lines are superb. I liked it.

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Neela Nath Das 12 November 2012

Very optimistic. Loved the thought and your unique style of write!

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Valerie Dohren 11 November 2012

Great philosophy, live for tomorrow - well penned.

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Joseph Anderson 10 November 2012

Stimulating and exalting, a bounty of wisdom. Wise and truthful thoughts.I can't say enough for this gem. This way will serve anyone well

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We thrive on expectations. Every phase of time ahead is a rose of promise. When Sunday dies, we begin to wait for Monday.. That`s why man is optimistic. Similarly when you close your lines of a poem, we begin to wait for your next one.... [not joking]

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