Today Is A Perfect Day... Comments

A passionate, romantic poem with love at its heart. Your repetition of the 'chorus' of the piece is excellent. I wonder though, don't you mean 'perfect' rather than 'prefect'? love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

the best day of your life means additional age for you the whole world celebrates not anyone forgets.. this day is the happiest day where your mom gave her life and your dad prepared the best food for your mom who in many hours suffers her pains just to bring you in this world.. don't forget that this day is also your mother's new life so please say thanks to her she will be happy for that.. also accept my heartfelt wishes for you i wish you goodhealth and more wealth wish you contentment in life wish you the best of everything.. dear, happy birthday a hug and a kiss will always be unforgetable accept it as a gift to you from philippines to your place.. make your day fine, make your life colorful i'll always send my prayers for you to be always safe.. happy birthday.....we love you....naizz

sweet and romantic... touching...the thoughts are really lovely... dazzling with innermost feelings... 10+++ HAPPY...HAPPY BIRTHDAY.... _maia_

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU a little baby grown upto the sky the blues he touches with soft pink cheeks the heart of soft it pours verses sweet only to wake up the sadder hearts cradling gloomy minds to sleep lulling them with lovely words for a brighter tomorrow and bubbling healthy life With a heart of pure sincerity and love...

Happy Birthday Hazem........you always offer us a romatic and sizzling poetry crafted by your inspired mind........Lovely poem! ! !

As always another beautiful poem...: -)