Monday, January 27, 2020

Today In My Netherlands.... Comments

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Today In My Netherlands

Today in my Netherlands
lots of pluvium
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

Upon the grey sand lots of pluvium we see and feel in the Netherlands. the glistening of winter endearing splendor. The momentum is captured and amazing sense is expressed. The inner court of a dwelling, which is usually open to the sky is capable of explaining snow appearance and disappearance. No winter-wonderland is dazzled as winter-wonderland and upon the grey sand lots of pluvium amaze mind. This poem is excellently penned....10

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Bharati Nayak 28 January 2020

that's today in my Netherland lots of pluvium lots of pluvium lots of pluvium upon the grey sand alas, no winterwonderland no new wintertales.... - - - - A lovely poem - You miss the snowy winter of bygone days! Perhaps this is due to climate change.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 January 2020

lots of pluvium optimal in the winter where is the shimmer of this amazing noise? Very poetic lines, verses dear Sylvia., . thank u very much. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 January 2020

'three months there...' sorry I didn't say where, it was Ooty, Nilgiri Hills, a hill station in South India. And what a wet spell! You like rains, but there is limit.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 January 2020

Ah, your poem has transported me back 'a decennium', yes nearly ten years but a long lost time like a millennium. I had spent nearly three months there and experienced that 'pluvium' as you said, rains and more rains, no sun (of course no snow was expected) ....And I had penned a poem there on missing the sun. Fabulous.

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Prabir Gayen 27 January 2020

Today in my Netherlands lots of pluvium lots of pluvium lots of pluvium upon the grey sand... Pluvium pluvium and pluvium....

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