Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Today...I Will... Comments

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Today...I'll look outside myself
If only for awhile
I'll overlook my pain
To make another smile
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Dee Daffodil
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Chuck Audette 12 September 2008

This is a really good poem! It'd probably be worth smoothing out the flow a bit and submitting it for publication somewhere. -chuck

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Juliette Lamoureux 06 August 2008

Yes it is good to look at life from anothers point of view.

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I am really, really glad I read this. Hugs - and admiration. t x

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Ted Sheridan 01 August 2008

Good advice and we all should do it more because we really are rather selfish.

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Frank Cannon 29 July 2008

And tomorrow? ? ... Nice idea well accomplished Dee.

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C T Heart 29 July 2008

David is right! ! ! better late than never, anyway. Thanks

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David Taylor 29 July 2008

Never too late Dee, David

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