Friday, June 21, 2013

Today I Saw Comments

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Today I saw a beggar
Who was about to die because of hunger
I looked at him from feet to head
He was old and almost naked
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Abhishek Mishra
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Alookh (matin) 27 September 2013

ah! this is a thoughtful piece! ...its a pain for me when i see these people...brings lots of sorrow to me....it saddens me...the last 2 lines are very effective! ...u may like to read ma poem: child of poverty thanx!

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Patricia Grantham 23 September 2013

Thank you for this inspiring write about the hungry and desolate. They will always be a part of society but we still can attend to their needs and be a help to them. A kind and compassionate person you are. Please read these two poems that I wrote titled On a Mission and the Homeless. You are gifted.

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Lorraine Colon 21 June 2013

Very nice poem resulting from a kind act. If only we all cared about each other in this way. I hope your poem inspires people to start looking around them and acknowledge all the suffering taking place. We all can do our part. Thank you!

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