Thursday, December 27, 2012

Today I Saw Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I saw my Grandson
His head was in a muddle
He messed around until he slipped
And fell into a puddle;
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John Carter Brown
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Valerie Dohren 07 January 2013

Oh the joys of childhood - lovely and enchanting write John.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 January 2013

Wonderful rythmic piece of work... and a wonderful grandson, too

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Joseph Anderson 04 January 2013

Well, I liked it.Such a great portrayel of yhat scruffy little ball of energy and I along with you wish I was that kid, one more time. Much more then a comedy write, it was poignant and touching

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Clarence Prince 27 December 2012

A very nice poem, I enjoyed the read, John! Furthermore, it's good that you can spend time in the company of your grandson, may you both be blessed!

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Heather Wilson 27 December 2012

Oh, the wonder of reliving childhood through grandchildren, a really lovely write John.

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