Today I saw my Grandson
His head was in a muddle
He messed around until he slipped
And fell into a puddle;
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Wonderful rythmic piece of work... and a wonderful grandson, too
Well, I liked it.Such a great portrayel of yhat scruffy little ball of energy and I along with you wish I was that kid, one more time. Much more then a comedy write, it was poignant and touching
A very nice poem, I enjoyed the read, John! Furthermore, it's good that you can spend time in the company of your grandson, may you both be blessed!
Oh, the wonder of reliving childhood through grandchildren, a really lovely write John.
Oh the joys of childhood - lovely and enchanting write John.