Today I Move On Comments

just splendid, give one a hand to hold onto life`s strand of hope

All the heartbreak and tears taught lessons, now gone Today I look forward Today I move on! i liked it! :)

i just read this one again brings a tear to the eye! ! 10

As with fishy tale, I love the hope and optimism of this one, even though sometimes keeping hope is the hardest part.

Fantastically written. Unfortunatly, when you close the door, some of those emotions still slip through the keyhole! SG xo

No judgements, no bias No prejudice, no spin Take each person on merit And the heart that's within.... beautifully said....great lines cheers

Moving was nvr ever easy 2 me... Bt yo verse made all d fear of mvng on 2 fade away, yo poem is beautifuly writen!

'Today I look forward Today I move on' A lovely job this poem is, Vanessa! Blessings! !

Very positive and very focused. For sure you will succeed because you are cleaning your heart and emotions out nice words, good lines, good poem.

Keep moving on to better one Vanessa, like every single teardrop..it leave from eyes to fall down when the pressure of emotion stress it out...then it will meet a new place in the air as the wet of the face will dry...and it free now...Dont lock regret in closet because it took space for happiness to be kept...Now open the window let the shine illuminate the dark and you will stay in bright..stay smile Vanessa because we live for once_Unwritten Soul

This is optimism... this is pragmatism. Chin up.. Don't brood over past mistakes or sufferings. This world is a big place for anyone who has the right approach and optimism.. cheers and all blessings.. Kunjubi

Beautifully written the ever present easy flow of each line. I really enjoyed the words and the way your drew me right into the poem. Great Job.

Lovely words Vanessa, if only we all could learn from this the world would be a better place. Well done. Wendy.x

all positive steps forward will only lead to good things along our new path. nice write.

Today I move on - A beautiful poem. The perfect culmination to the poems which come before!

The up-beat rhyme scheme gives a positive and hopeful feel to this sagacious poem - you get the message across beautifully. S :)

You ask too much! :) good write.

You have a very clear mind, and can take charge of yourself. That's really great. Keep it going. Lovely presentation

magnificent rhyming........i give it 10