Saturday, June 9, 2012

Today, A Phantom. (A Triolet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heavy it lays upon my heart,
that today is a morrows past,
what there is now, an end, -a start,
heavy it lays upon my heart,
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Raja Nosherwan
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Christopher Cariad 11 June 2012

Such an amazing work, every moment in life is a precious gift!

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Sonali Sings 10 June 2012

A moment's truth leaves an eternal mark indeed, a realization to hold all prospects of a particular moment. Very fine.

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Kasia Fedyk 10 June 2012

I so understand the feeling and the depth it flows with, deep inside the soul an imprint becomes a light of knowledge of becoming lighter even though the heaviness is still felt yet the light lingers and burns even brighter upon the moments. Beautiful, just beautiful!

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